Poems

This is all new to me, I wanted unbiased feedback on my writing. So here's one I wrote not too long ago.

Untouchable
September 2, 2008
I glance down at the scars
A geometry of loneliness and regret
Of fear and sin
Of love, my past not left behind
The outer scars unsightly
But my soul bears worse
Beauty was left when venomous blood
Dripped vicious red in th sink
And congealed to viscous oblivion